Until the next time... is a blog usually focused on writing, music, and travel to places near and far. It concerns some of the things I've learned and some of the things I've messed up through the years. The blog also appears at www.michaelembry.com/blog.html.
Thursday, December 22, 2022
The Books I Read in 2022
Thursday, May 6, 2021
Manuscript Report: Back to the Editor and Recent Read
My latest manuscript is back in the hands of my able and trusting editor. She'll make the edits, send it on to a proofreader, and format the work into a galley proof.
I probably added another 800 words to the manuscript, bringing the total to about 60k. There were some transitions needed between scenes, dialogue fixes, and additional descriptive passages in the "show, don't tell" category.
The galley will return to me for a final read and minor edits for any typos as well as grammatical errors, and misspellings that may have slipped through on the first edits. If you're wondering if I'm getting tired of reading and editing the manuscript, well you're right. But it's a process that has to be done to make things right for the writer and reader.
While I'm busy with the words, the graphic artist at Wings ePress will try to capture the essence of the words into a book cover that will pique the interest of readers.
If all goes well, the manuscript and cover will magically (at least in my mind) transform into a book, the fifth in the John Ross Boomer Lit series, on Oct. 1.
And here is a recent read:
William H. Coles's book is for those who are interested in writing fiction, providing examples of how to approach different areas such as scenes, characters, structure, dialogue, and revision. He's the author of novels, short stories, and essays, He also created www.storyinliteraryfiction.com, a useful website with resources for writers, illustrators, and readers of literary fiction. Check it out!
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Friday, May 25, 2018
Writing Advice: My Take on Finishing a Novel
His problem was that he'd written the first part, three chapters, and knew how it was going to end, but was stuck in the middle, staring a those proverbial blank pages. He wanted to know what to do.
My advice was to go ahead and write the final chapter(s), then go backward and fill in the missing parts that lead to the ending.
I thought the most important thing for him to do was to write, not to get hung up on the overall story. I know quite a few authors who knocked out about 50 pages, then hit the wall and gave up. It happened to me a couple times before I finally worked through it with my first novel, The Touch, in 1998. It's also important for the writer to understand that the words their putting down is simply the first draft. They'll be amazed how the novel grows and develops over subsequent rewrites and revisions before they reach "The End."
Above all, I believe the key to success is to write every day, be it 15 minutes or 15 hours. For me, I write through the difficult days, often discovering later that those passages gave me deeper insights into my story.

How would you tackle my friend's dilemma?
If you have any questions about writing that you'd like me to address, leave it in the "comment" box below or send it privately to my email (I won't disclose your name).
Until the next time . . .
Sunday, November 30, 2014
NaNoWriMo -- Finished (Almost)
I wrote 50,241 words over the 30-day marathon. It feels good to reach that level. My average was 1,674 words a day.
While I was able to produce more than 50k words, I'm still working on a first draft. This manuscript is probably two-thirds of the way finished, but it's a good start.
There's still a lot of work to be done to fill in holes, develop characters, and stay focused on the overall story.
Then comes the hard part of writing -- the rewrite. It's almost like starting over, except that I'm not working with blank pages. It's the long process to polish sentences, further develop characters, show rather than tell, improve dialogue, and much more.
I'll be posting more about that process after I finish the first draft.
As for the work-in-progress, in case you're wondering, it will fall under the boomer-lit category. More about that later.
But, for the moment, I'm glad that I've reached the NaNoWriMo summit even though I have higher mountains to climb.
Until the next time...
Sunday, May 19, 2013
Two Rewrites Down and More to Go
I was able to tie some loose ends together but I found a few more holes along the way. I may also delete a scene that I'm not sure needs to be in the story. It'll probably be cut or rewritten.
And I'm not pleased with the ending. That's going to involve some major revisions on the third rewrite.
Along the way I take notes on changes that need to be made. It makes it a lot easier when going back over the manuscript. I also need to add more description to characters and scenes.
So, as you can see, there's a lot of work to be done.
I'll probably print the manuscript after the third rewrite. I find it useful to see the words on paper. I'll also take out my red pencil to mark it up -- a reminder of my early days as a journalist working on the copy desk.
I want to keep the manuscript in the 50k range, and now it's inching toward 52k.
I'll keep you posted after the third rewrite.
Until the next time...






